This latest page is much, much, much better but it could have been even more better! Still working on it, will play with some more tweaks on the next page.
But until then, I noticed that when I decided to name this Cowboys: In Space I picked an orange color for the text because it just looked right to me, especially against the black/spacy background. It only occurs to me now, four days later, that I may have been channeling this:
Erm… GO POKES!