Well, the votes are in and while everyone who read my first panel got a good chuckle out of it, they agreed that it was a little hard to follow. The line of conversation wasn’t as clearly defined as it could/should have been. Other than that, they liked it. Since this is my first attempt, ever, at making a comic and I have no training whatsoever in this field, I think only having the one complaint is good.
I am going to work on this problem. I have the script for the second panel already made (mostly) and getting ready to design the panel. I think I’ll opt for making real panels this time instead of inserting the pictures directly onto the background. Go for a traditional comic layout, see if that fixes it. It’s all a learning curve.